My Love, you are with me for the past 14 years. But there is something you don’t know about me and my love. Here to say you …..
What You Don’t Know, My Love
I feel emptiness at the moment you leave me
I stopped eating all your favorites without you
I cannot sleep so safely without your arms around me
I keep your last worn shirt with me to smell you
I feel loneliness amidst a big crowd if you were not there
I love to start and end my days looking into your eyes
I love being with you in silence for eternity
I cook with more joy and love only for you
I cherish all the little things that reminds you
I cannot control myself to listen to your song endlessly
I feel lost while traveling without you
I love you more than I love myself
I am not me without you
P.S : Dedicated to my love. Written on July 31st when he left to South Africa after his vacation.
Do you have anything to share that we don’t know ???
Submitting this post for #BarAThon hosted by Blog-A-Rhythm. Today, Day #2 prompt is What you don’t know. I’m a part of team Blue Lagoon. Enjoy the other posts or happily participate here.
Nice poem…but just a thought…one can find peace and joy in solitude too right? Should it be dependant on anyone?
Thanks. You too are right !!!
I too am participating in the BarAThon…hop on my blog if you have time. ☺
Done with pleasure, Varsh !!!
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Sweet and romantic. Hope your other half reads it, so that he knows 🙂
Thanks Mayuri !!!
Vasantha this was so lovely! I think your hubby will be checking online for the earliest flight bookings to India after reading this soulful poem!
Ha … Ha … Ha … !!! Thanks dear !!!
Lovely poem. Hope he got to read it too. 🙂
Thanks Rekha !!!
Sweet and romantic. That’s touching that you still feel sad when he goes away on trips. Very heartfelt poem.
Thanks !!!
That’s a sweet one! Has he read this? He must! 🙂
agree with what everyone else says… he must read this 🙂
I too wish he should read this … 😛
Thanks Shilpa !!! Not yet …. 🙁
awww I hope he will be back soon. This is so sweet 🙂
He should … 😛 Thanks Raj !!!
It’s beautiful and really sweet!
Cheers
Geets
Thanks Geets !!!
A lovely poem. I think you must share this poem on facebook and tag your husband.
Ha … Ha …. Ha ….. But he don’t like that …. 🙁
Huh!! Such are men 😀
Awww ur all heart Vasantha. Loads if hugs
Thanks a lot, Sunila …. <3 <3 <3
Beautiful composition! And, he must know these things. She must express her feelings 🙂
Thanks !!!
I can so identify with this one..I feel the same when hubby goes away on tours..and I wear his oversized T shirt to bed too!
Shubhangi @ The Little Princess
Ha … Ha …. Ha …. Stay loved, Shubhangi !!!
It was the same with me last year when he left me behind for his posting. Lovely poem.
Thanks dear !!!
Such a sweet poem, so full of emotions I must say! Just beautiful.
Thanks a lot, Reema …. <3 <3 <3
Loved the poem drenched in love and longing.
What he might not know as yet, now we all know. Lucky we 🙂
Thanks a lot !!!
This is just absolutely beautiful Vasantha. I felt like that about someone once. May you carrying these feelings always. Your guy is very lucky to have you. 🙂
Thank you so much <3<3 <3
Nice words!
Thanks Subha !!!
Lovely and sweet poem.. But one secret ..you don’t know that I know this.. !
Thanks a lot, dear …… We know ….. that we knew each other ….. Love you always ……
Beautiful poem expressing what lies in your heart for your love:)
Awwwwww…how beautiful. (I hope he would write the same poem in honor of you).
Wonderfully written Vasantha. May God bless you both with more happiness. ☺
Thanks dear … <3 <3 <3
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Wow! Lovely declaration of love dear Vasantha 🙂 I think you must let him have a read of this one just to know how wonderful a poem you’ve written for him…will surely make his day, don’t you think?
Yes Esha, He read that and had given his comments too in the post … <3
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Ahh .. It’s so touching !!
Thanks, dear ….. <3
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