I Wish I Were ….

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I wish I were ………

I wish I were an ocean

To wipe the tears of my nation

I wish I were a fire

To burn the evils around everywhere

I wish I were a sky

To spread all along the way

I wish I were an earth

To hold my dears on my breath

I wish I were a wind

To sooth the stress of your mind

I wish I were a mountain

To stand tall against violence

I wish I were a cloud

To fly over meadows and gardens

I wish I were a flower

To springle my fragrance around

I wish I were a pet 

To be cherished by my kid

I wish I were a river

To flow with flow of my life

I wish I were a light

To make your eyes bright

I wish I were a rainbow

To fill your days with vibrant colors

I wish I were myself enough

To celebrate this God-given life

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38 thoughts on “I Wish I Were ….

    • December 27, 2016 at 10:54 AM
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      Thanks Menaka !!!

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  • December 3, 2016 at 7:14 PM
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    Such fantastic ideas .I wish I were everything you said too.That would be a lot of fun.
    Nice take on the prompt.

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:53 AM
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      Thanks Amirta !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:53 AM
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      Thanks Maliny !!!

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  • December 3, 2016 at 7:53 PM
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    Beautiful wishes all! But really, you are wonderful enough yourself to celebrate this God-given life!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:53 AM
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      Thanks a lot, Kala !!!

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  • December 3, 2016 at 8:52 PM
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    I wish all your wishes come true…
    For me I wish I could fly and learn magic and many more 🙂

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:52 AM
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      Thanks dear !!!

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  • December 3, 2016 at 11:30 PM
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    That was a sweet poem, Vasantha!
    I wish I were a bird, soaring in the sky and visiting places far and wide!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:52 AM
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      Thanks Shilpa !!!

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  • December 5, 2016 at 11:03 PM
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    The last lines were just beautiful Vasantha! I loved the various wishes you have written in this poem.
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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:51 AM
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      Thanks Reema !!!

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  • December 7, 2016 at 12:13 PM
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    Vasantha, the last two lines were the ones I loved the most. So poignant and to the point. Oh, our wishful thinking runs wild no?

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:50 AM
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      Thanks Ramya !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:49 AM
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      Thanks Subha !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:48 AM
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      Thanks Rohan !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:48 AM
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      Thanks Ramya !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:47 AM
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      Thanks !!!

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  • December 8, 2016 at 8:41 PM
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    Brilliant Vasantha,you have shown all the emotions with appropriate duties. It was a treat reading your poem.

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:47 AM
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      Thanks a ton, dear geethica !!!

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  • December 8, 2016 at 10:08 PM
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    I wish I were a mountain and a bird.
    To stand up and fight for people who are weak is a difficult road to walk on.
    Very beautifully scripted

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:46 AM
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      Thanks Amirta !!!

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  • December 9, 2016 at 9:56 AM
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    Such nice wishes, & the lines wining say – I wish mI was my child’s pet is so deep!
    I also like, how you end your poem. I also, wish I was myself enough!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:45 AM
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      Thanks !!!

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  • December 10, 2016 at 10:20 AM
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    I wish I was myself too to enjoy the life that I have and amongst all your wishes that seems the most likely and the most important 🙂
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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:44 AM
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      True Chandni !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:44 AM
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      Thanks Vishal !!!

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    • December 27, 2016 at 10:43 AM
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      Thanks !!!

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  • January 9, 2017 at 4:02 PM
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    Hi Vasantha.An amazing piece of mind that you gave us here.If wishes could be that powerful they would be world-changing!Well,I am Abha jha and I have a blog at https://abhajhablog.wordpress.com.I would like to share with you some authentic Indian recipes if you are interested in the area of food and I hope you find something of your interest.Well you have a great blog here.Well keep up the good work.Thanks for the share of this beautiful piece ready to touch so many hearts.It already touched mine.

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    • January 9, 2017 at 7:09 PM
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      Thanks Abha for your loving words …. 🙂

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